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⇨He was an overwhelming presence like swallowing the main character.
His speaking way and voices resounded heavily. Especially the scene that gnaws the remains of a dead daughter, it made me feel bottomless fear and eeriness.
彼はまさに主人公を飲み込むような圧倒的な存在感でした。ゆったりとした喋り方と、重く響く声。特に死んだ娘の遺骨をかじるシーンなんか、思わず息をのむような迫力と、底知れない不気味さを感じさせる名シーンでした。

⇨I think that the reason why Godzilla (1954) is still said to reign in the top of the series is that the strong warning message for excessive science and technology is clearly expressed.
ゴジラ(1954)が未だなおシリーズ頂点に君臨すると言われている理由は、行き過ぎた科学技術に対する警鐘という強いメッセージが明確に表現されていることにあると私は思います。

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投稿日時 - 2017-11-15 06:02:36

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⇨He [had] an overwhelming presence, [so much so that he capped] the main character. His [gentle way of] speaking and his [low, resounding] voice, [was enthralling]. [In particular,] [I was taken back by] the scene [where he] gnaws the remains of [his] dead daughter; [I felt endless] fear and eeriness.
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⇨I [personally] think that the reason why Godzilla (1954) is still said to reign in the top of the series is that [it sends out a clear and] strong message [against] excessive [advancement in] science and technology.
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投稿日時 - 2017-11-15 08:15:19

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投稿日時 - 2017-11-15 10:13:16

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>He was an overwhelming presence like swallowing the main character.
His speaking way and voices resounded heavily. Especially the scene that gnaws the remains of a dead daughter, it made me feel bottomless fear and eeriness.
⇒an overwhelming presence、like swallowing the main character、the scene that gnaws、あたりを添削しました。
→He was the very overwhelming presence as if he had swallowed the main character.
His speaking way and voices resounded heavily. Especially the scene where he gnawed the remains of a dead daughter (, it) made me feel bottomless fear and eeriness.

>I think that the reason why Godzilla (1954) is still said to reign in the top of the series is that the strong warning message for excessive science and technology is clearly expressed.
⇒the strong warning message for excessive scienceを添削しました。
→I think the reason why Godzilla (1954) is still said to reign in the top of the series is that a strong warning message against excessive scientific technology is clearly expressed.

投稿日時 - 2017-11-15 09:21:02